Elevator Pitch No. 2
The feedback I received wasn't silly or wrong at any time, and I found it to be constructive. From the feedback I knew I had to practice my delivery a little bit more and work on my fluidity. I became aware that my product/service got lost in some of the statistics and supporting information I provided, so it was helpful and I think crucial to my pitch that I was able to learn from the feedback I received. There was some aspects of the pitch that I wasn't too sure about when I first published it and some of those aspects received positive feedback, which cemented my confidence in them.
I practiced my pitch and became comfortable with my delivery and was able to shorten it a little bit as the pitch almost became second nature and more fluid. I also played with the camera angle to make it appear more engaging and easier to watch. The feedback helped me make minor tweaks and gave me an indicator of what of was good and what needed improvement.
Caelan,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. You packed a lot of information in a very short period of time, but the pace is easy to follow, and you do not rush through it at all. Seems like you practiced a lot, and it shows. The lighting is good, the sound is clear, and you persuade with your message. Your closing line delivers a final punch and ends with a high note. My only recommendation would be to place the camera at eye-level, so you do not stare down at your viewers. Again, great job with your pitch and looking forward the next one!
Caelan,
ReplyDeleteI think you definitely were about to improve on the things that you said you need to, including the fluidity of the pitch and the connection you had with the audience. You made it seem as though you knew your product even more by doing so, and this gave you more confidence when speaking into the camera. Overall, great job and continue to work on keeping your pitches simple because the audience doesn't know what your product is and you don't have that much time to explain it to them.